There is a lot of work that needs to be done here.
My plan to resolve the issue is to break the novel down in some sort of outline. Rather, I will be using the three act story structure. It is a tried and true plot format, which is very visible in The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins, and I hope to have success with it.
The simple break down, as far as my knowledge, is this:
Act I: Welcome To The World Of Something Doesn't Seem Quite Right
- Show the reader the worlds, the setting and the background of the world in which the story takes place.
- Introduce the main character(s).
- A problem occurs that changes the world or more importantly how the main character(s) views it.
- Questions must be raised that the must be answered at the conclusion of the story.
Act II: The Hair Pulling and Nail Biting
- The main character(s) must try to resolve the problem. They make the problem worse as they do not yet have the skill to resolve the problem.
- The main character(s) must try to develop the new skill as well as come to a higher sense of awareness of what they are capable of.
Act III: The Part Where the Reader Just Can't Put The Book Down
- The Climax! (In some examples I have seen the climax as the end point to Act II, others the start point to Act III. Do as you wish in your own novel break down.)
- Answer the questions you raised through the story.
- Make the main character(s) victors or failures.
Now, keeping that structure in mind, I have drawn up this map.
THREE ACT
BREAKDOWN
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ACT I: BOOK I
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ACT II: BOOK II
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ACT III: BOOK III
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THE WORLD
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THE PROBLEM
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THE CLIMAX
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THE CAST
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THE SKILLS THE
MC NEEDS
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THE CATILIST OUT
OF THE FAMILIAR
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THE INNER TURMOIL
THE MC MUST OVERCOME
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THE RESOLUTION
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THE QUESTIONS
THAT ARE RAISED
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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BOOK I: IN THREE
ACTS
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BOOK II: IN THREE
ACTS
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BOOK III: IN THREE
ACTS
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THE WORLD
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THE PROBLEM
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THE CLIMAX
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THE WORLD
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THE PROBLEM
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THE CLIMAX
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THE WORLD
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THE PROBLEM
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THE CLIMAX
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THE CAST
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THE SKILLS THE MC NEEDS
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THE CAST
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THE SKILLS THE MC NEEDS
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THE CAST
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THE SKILLS THE MC NEEDS
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THE CATILIST OUT OF THE FAMILIAR
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THE INNER TURMOIL THE MC MUST OVERCOME
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THE RESOLUTION
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THE CATILIST OUT OF THE FAMILIAR
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THE INNER TURMOIL THE MC MUST OVERCOME
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THE RESOLUTION
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THE CATILIST OUT OF THE FAMILIAR
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THE INNER TURMOIL THE MC MUST OVERCOME
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THE RESOLUTION
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THE QUESTIONS THAT ARE RAISED
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE QUESTIONS THAT ARE RAISED
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE QUESTIONS THAT ARE RAISED
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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THE MAIN EVENTS
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It is a simple structure based on the three act outline. My plan is to break the major plot down over the three books and break the sub plots down in the individual books. Please feel free to borrow and alter this outline, but send me any helpful tips you have on making it better!
I honestly believe this structure is what my novel is lacking right now. I know where I want the story to go, but it just seems to be flat-lining a bit. I know this change will put some fire under my butt.
Happy writing!
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